Format for the show:
1. running an actual message test with their ICPs (demand gen leaders in their case),
2. analyzing the data,
3. creating a new version to address the identified issues.
My conclusion: the home page can improve a lot.
Overall clarity: 3.5/5
Message relevance: 3.4/5
Interest in the demo: 2.9/5
Chili Piper is doubling inbound conversion rates for their customers. I think Wynter can do the same for them.
Identified issues:
- the logo needs to include the company name for better brand recognition
- the headline needs to be stronger and more specific
- folks are not sure who it's for
- "most advanced" is off-putting and unclear
- "get a demo" CTA above the fold is way too early
- "leaky funnel" is eye-rolling cliche
- funnel visualization is not working
- paragraph copy around the funnel is problematic
- saying "Our products" is a missed opportunity
- a lot of confusion around the 3 products: who are they for, do you get 1 or all, what's the difference etc
- thin content: the page leaves people with unanswered questions even after reading everything (eg. what's implementation like)
- differentiation vs top alternatives not spelled out
- overall use cases/benefits too vague for some
What's working well
- good customer logo selection
- people like the story of how the marketing funnel has changed
- folks want better meetings conversion rate
Find out how I'd re-do their page in the video.
Some changes:
Above the fold
- include the full company name in the logo
- new headline
- new paragraph copy above the fold mentioning ICPs
- new CTA (answering the key question people develop here: 'how do you do it?'
- new line above the logos
Funnel section
- new headline for the funnel section... it also needs a new graphic
- re-write the paragraph copy: take out the misplaced comma, new last line
Our Products section
- rewrite the subhead to reinforce the main benefit
- include implementation info
- mention bundle vs separately
- for products, spell out what they do
New section:
- I'd add another section to address key doubts around differentiation (e.g. why use over Hubspot)
- Spell out more case studies of how X and Y gets results